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Old 26th Jan 2012, 12:55 PM New Sims 2 Series - Innocence #1
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Hiya!

I feel a bit nervous posting here seeing as what, this is my first post? But I was hoping to get some feedback on my new series, Innocence. It's a novel I've been working on for nearly 4 years, but when writer's block struck a week ago, I got hooked on my forgotten Sims games and rediscovered all the glory of custom content. I've never really tried to make any Sim movies before (okay, that's a lie. I did try. About 4 years ago. With the same story. It didn't go too well, but that's also because I hadn't discovered custom content). I have however been making movies for 8 years and I love it.

This is Chapter/Episode/Part 1. I just completed Part 2 today, but was hoping to get some views before I rush ahead and upload it. Chapter 1 is quite slow. It begins by introducing my main character, Damien, and his job, and the way he interacts with those around him. It also introduces a theme of mistakes *hint hint*. That said, everything is about to change for him, for the worst. I will be using custom content, which I'm going to try and give credits to in every video description though by the look of my Downloads folder, I may or may not be able to list everything. I'm also trying my hand at my first few object recolours - yay! Wouldn't be possible without the mods and hacks and lovely items and treasures I've found here and around the other websites.

Buuut, let me know what you think? I'd be appreciative.

This is a crime/action/thriller type series, and particularly as later episodes arrive I recommend mature audiences.

Update! I don't know why I didn't do this first...

Website: http://sims2innocence.wordpress.com/
Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QE7AQBa5JBg
Full Playlist: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLC95B6B266F8D7BDE

Chapters [posted below from now on]

1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6yGY5MOquI
2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9_SCMw1VLM
3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dctFtZtuzpU
4 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qDk-o-w10nQ
5 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPLO2yS4u_E
6 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ehvwbw8hZ1s
7 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6y8rp_kwzpU
8 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HRgS7lAtXSY
9 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH_8VI4x84c
10 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nLzUrvPHlD8
11 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CAPlx097n7c
12 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VKO8Ka94qVs
13 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ok1XwpTuKhk
14 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9rhGL0qE0U
15 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hgNefPYg_pA
16 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmyboZjaNFg
17 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_HtHwY_SZU
18 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHvKqm6IoGU
19 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IOddfErjuQA
20 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YAKEgz4H4qU
21 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mSZFS-eg1Ek
22 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6wRMph0H3k
23 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJFh9ZFo7tg
24 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NmHdGp5sBXk
25 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=opA57vnmzzE

To stop this list getting any longer, please follow this link to the full playlist.

Last upload: Chapter 33
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Old 29th Jan 2012, 12:07 PM #2
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I have just uploaded Chapter 2 and finished Chapter 3. It's only short, as Chapter 3 is a little more dialogue heavy and the action begins!

http://youtu.be/u9_SCMw1VLM

What begins as a pleasant, after-school walk in the park ends quite differently...
Old 5th Feb 2012, 1:18 PM #3
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dctFtZtuzpU

Chapter 3 I would really love some feedback if you have any!
Old 26th Feb 2012, 12:46 PM #4
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Chapters 4-6 have been uploaded. See the first post
Old 20th Mar 2012, 4:22 PM #5
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I'm watching chapter 5 right now and i have to say I'm impressed. You have a really great story line, you stay on topic, and your shots are very clean. I can't tell you how many movies I've seen where the maker moves the camera around like their playing sims instead of making a movie. Very nice work!
Old 21st Mar 2012, 12:08 PM #6
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Thank youu I appreciate it! I haven't uploaded any videos for a while now but there will be more on the way.
Old 22nd Mar 2012, 12:51 AM #7
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Yay! :P
Old 22nd Mar 2012, 9:08 PM DefaultGreat job! #8
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I'm watching the series now, I also commented on it . I love it! It's really interesting
Old 25th Mar 2012, 11:03 AM #9
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Next chapter is up However I haven't yet filmed anything else so it's likely there may be another delay in uploads. For more photos of the prison, check out how I made it on my blog! It will be featured in a number of upcoming episodes.
Old 6th May 2012, 3:02 AM #10
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Hi guys! I know it's been a while but letting you know Chapter 9 has just been uploaded! Go check it out:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH_8VI4x84c

Took a bit of procrastination and a lot of filming! Also, Chapter 10 is guaranteed to be uploaded next weekend.
Old 13th May 2012, 1:22 AM #11
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Chapter 10 , as promised
Old 29th Jun 2012, 4:48 AM #12
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I know I've been slow, but this series is definitely still going ahead.

Yay for Chapter 11! Quite pleased with how this one turned out
Old 27th Jul 2012, 4:00 AM #13
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Chapters 12 and 13 have been added See the first post.

*Update*

Chapter 14 as well
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Old 26th Aug 2012, 3:00 PM #14
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Chapter 15 at you service
Old 23rd Sep 2012, 7:24 PM #15
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Wow! You're really dedicated to this series! From the episodes that I've watched, I really enjoyed them. I hope you still are creating more! I'd hate to see this series be left in the dust.

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Old 24th Sep 2012, 1:16 AM #16
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Wow! You're really dedicated to this series! From the episodes that I've watched, I really enjoyed them. I hope you still are creating more! I'd hate to see this series be left in the dust.


Thank you so much Definitely more coming. I've continued to write, create characters and lots, just a bit behind on the filming at the moment. Hopefully next chapter/s up in the next 2-3 weeks!
Old 30th Sep 2012, 10:42 AM #17
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Chapter 16 is now up Relatively short chapter so was done sooner than expected. Next chapter or two hopefully in the next 1-2 weeks!
Old 10th Oct 2012, 8:41 AM #18
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I just watched chapter 1. You have done a wonderful job using the movie camera. I am just learning to make movies. LOL
But I really enjoyed your movie, I will come back to watch the rest. Well done.
Simcerely,
Tasia.
Old 3rd Jan 2013, 1:22 AM #19
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Sorry for the massive delay in uploads - my life got a bit distracting! Next chapter is right here , and there are still many more to come.. hopefully sooner rather than later!
Old 13th Jul 2013, 2:21 AM #20
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Apparently, I have had a massive break from this series, and I've missed it Sorry about that, guys! But I'm here now, hopefully on a more regular basis again Chapter 19 has just been uploaded, and while it is quite a repetitive, text heavy chapter (sorry about that!) I can promise you that from here on out, things will start to get more exciting! Hope I haven't lost all of my viewers yet! I'm still out here, still planning to finish it, and still with a LOT to go :D
Old 13th Jul 2013, 9:15 AM #21
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Very good )
Old 13th Jul 2013, 12:29 PM #22
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great story! i missed it as you posted it until now, but today i just inhaled all chapters up to #19
what a cliffhanger right now.
so funny, when i first watched episode 1, i frowned in the middle thinking "WTH, schoolkids, huh?", came back here to see the description again, read "thriller, crime", and made another try
can't comment on youtube, lost access to my account
looking forward to the final episodes!
Old 15th Jul 2013, 7:04 AM #23
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Thanks guys! I have, much to my own surprise, just finished and uploaded Chapter 20 as well. 2 chapters uploaded in 3 days? Not too bad. So happy with how this one turned out.

portisHeart, Chapter 1 is quite slow and completely out of the genre, I agree! But as I said, it's basically setting up Damien's character, and a way of introducing him and what he does for a living - something which unfortunately has very much taken a turn on him!
Old 19th Jul 2013, 8:11 AM #24
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I just want you to know I absolutely love this series! I was balled up in my desk chair sipping hot chocolate going "Brother, brother, brother! He's got a twin brother!" I don't want to give it away to anyone reading this, but I was completely blown away. Absolutely can't wait for more - I'm definitely keeping up to date with this. You're a talented writer, keep it up.

- Krystal & Amanda
Old 21st Jul 2013, 11:09 AM #25
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This is really entertaining, keep it up xx
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