#5
4th Jun 2015 at 1:52 PM
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Ooooh, a cliff hanger... I like it, it's silly and reminds me of some comics and cartoons, but it stills feel unique and you can already get a hang of all of the characters.. ok except that last guy.
And I always wondered where is your avatar from... MEAT XD
Also, try using A4 clean paper with rulers and those thin pens ( you know, with changable heart). Study a bit of anatomy, or at least make lines consistent and smooth. That way, this is going to be very comfortable to read, and may become popular.