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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#1 Old 26th Mar 2009 at 9:26 AM Last edited by TheBoyFromMars. : 24th Dec 2009 at 9:46 AM.
Default Who Killed Tiffany Hillson? (COMPLETED)


She truly was living the dream. Tiffany Hillson that is, Until she was found dead. Tiffany Hillson had it all. The expensive car and mansion, eveyone knew the Hillson's. Tiffany Hillson was Miss Teen Universe twice! Not to mention head of the cheerleading squad, oh and dont forget her wonderful boyfriend Jason Mackverville, who is quaterback for the high school football team. She had it all and more.....One day your on top of your game. The next well....you know how that goes. Look what happened at Tiffany Hillson.



COMING SOON!

Am Back and its Time to get BittersWeet xoxo
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Mad Poster
#2 Old 26th Mar 2009 at 5:07 PM
I likey Detctives are awesome :D
Lab Assistant
#3 Old 26th Mar 2009 at 6:30 PM
Oo great beginning cant wait to see more!
Forum Resident
#4 Old 27th Mar 2009 at 2:59 AM
Ahhhh intrigue! I love stories like this.
Get a Veronica Mars esque character in there to solve it and I'm in love <3
Test Subject
#5 Old 27th Mar 2009 at 3:47 AM
Well, you write a great hook :-)

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Field Researcher
#6 Old 27th Mar 2009 at 3:51 AM
Great start! Can't wait to read more

Just Call Me Allie :)
#7 Old 27th Mar 2009 at 4:00 AM
this is an great little intro you wrote,
its grabbbed my interest

i will definitely be keeping an eye out on this one.
good luck <3
Field Researcher
#8 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 8:25 AM
Looking forward to it.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#9 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 10:28 PM
Default Chapter 1: Yasmine Connors


She walked in shutting the door behind her. "Detective Pleasant, and no jokes because i've heard them all." Detective Pleasant strode over to the desk where Yasmine Connors was sitting.



Detective: So Yasmine Connors is it?

Yasmine: Yes.

Detective: Sorry to hear about your friend. Were working really hard to get to the bottom of this. It must be really hard time for you.

Yasmine: It is but am pulling through. Thank you for your concern and if theres anything I can do for you. Please let me know.

Detective: I do have a question for you Miss.Connors. Can you tell me about Tiffany Hillson's boyfriend? Jason Mackerville...

Yasmine: umm okay...What do you want to know?

Detective: How was there relationship? In your eyes? In your opinion..

Yasmine: Well it seemed pefectly normal as any relationship. Tiffany had it all. Perfect car and mansion. Perfect boyfriend....the usual. Nothing out of the ordinary.Why?

Detective: Really? Just normal and perfect? Nothing else?

Yasmine: Well yes detective. Why?

Detective: Tiffany had it all huh? Must be nice....how bout you? It says here your father is a Lawyer. You must not live the hard life either? Probably not a life like Tiffany tho? is that right?

Yasmine: What are you implying detective? or you saying am a suspect?

(Detective Pleasant chuckles)

Detective: Darling everyone is a suspect....including you.

Yasmine: This is ridiculous...Tiffany was my best friend.

Detective: oh really? So do best friends usually have a secret realtionship with there bestfriends boyfriend?hmm? Tell me? Because I dont recall at all sleeping with my bestfriend's boyfriend...or is that how kids do it now?

Yasmine: I dont know what your talking about!

Detective: Oh I think you do know what am talking about. Jealousy...Secret relationship. But I must say your father being a lawyer really is the cherry on top. Makes perfect since for an albi.

(Yasmine sits up quickly)

Yasmine: I dont have to answer any of your questions!

Yasmine sits up quickly adjusting her dress and heads for the door. As she pulls open the door the Detective stops her dead in her tracks.

Detective: Oh and Miss. Connors.....If you havent figured out by now.......Am really good at my job. I'll be in touch....

Am Back and its Time to get BittersWeet xoxo
Mad Poster
#10 Old 29th Mar 2009 at 12:26 AM
Loving it! can't wait for an update :D
Field Researcher
#11 Old 29th Mar 2009 at 10:03 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Kyle
Loving it! can't wait for an update :D


Me too. Keep it up.
Inventor
#12 Old 2nd Apr 2009 at 1:43 AM
I Am Obsessed. Must Have More Who-killed-tiffany-hilson Now. Now! I Am Counting The Seconds. One... Two... Three...
Inventor
#13 Old 2nd Apr 2009 at 1:45 AM
Seriously though, great story. amazing how you can make to intruging with so few words. Bravo. I would take off my hat to you, but I don't have a smiley that does that. So, I'll just leave it on. :hat:
Lab Assistant
#14 Old 2nd Apr 2009 at 6:48 AM
want more now!!! haha!
#15 Old 3rd Apr 2009 at 3:22 PM
Very nice.. a few grammar problems, but so far.. GREAT.. loved the pictures..
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#16 Old 24th Apr 2009 at 9:31 PM
Default Chapter 2: Suspects
The door shut behind Miss.Conners leaving Detective Pleasant alone in the room. As Detective Pleasant gathered her things on the desk the door opened behind. Detective Pleasant turned only to face Lieutenant Downey.

Detective Pleasant: Lieutenant..

Lieutenant Downey: Agent Pleasant..What do you got?



Detective Pleasant: Well all we know is that there was a secret relationship between Miss.Conners and Jason Mackerville. However it could be nothing. I need to dig into the others before we start to point the finger.

Lieutenant Downey: Secret relationship. One girl dead. A million other suspects. A innocent girl was murdered...stabbed 13 times in the chest and lower liver area. Her right hand missing and her eyes plucked out. I want the sick bastard who did this. I want each student,teachers,friends,ex boyfriends,parents,maids,butler anything you can think of...I want them all investigated. Everyone is a suspect.


She stood there facing and gazing upon the reflection casted in the mirror. Tiffany was dead. She repeated it a thousands times in her head. The queen bee was gone and she was never coming back.



(The door opened and Jennifer walked in)



Jennifer: Hey the police are here to escort us to school you ready?



Sasha: Yea just gimme a second okay?

(Jennifer nodded and closed the door. Sasha staired into the mirror one more time)

I was horrified that my best friend was dead. I would never want this on anyone. Never but a small part of me was well happy.......

Am Back and its Time to get BittersWeet xoxo
Mad Poster
#17 Old 25th Apr 2009 at 12:57 AM
I like it! Keep it up!

This is getting interesting.
Forum Resident
#18 Old 25th Apr 2009 at 3:19 AM
Ooh yay, an update!
Poor Tiffany..what a way to go.
Field Researcher
#19 Old 25th Apr 2009 at 4:51 AM
Hmm. Interesting, why is that girl happy. Great update.
Lab Assistant
#20 Old 25th Apr 2009 at 8:16 PM
great update! Jennifer and Sasha look great!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#21 Old 29th Apr 2009 at 2:35 AM
Default Chapter 3: A Killer in Woodsberry?
The school was covered by Police and News Channels. They entered the school cafeteria where Yasmine was sitting at the table waiting for them. Sasha quickly sat next to Yasmine well Jennifer took a seat across from them.



Sasha: Oh my god I cant believe this is happening...Like really..I dont even know how to feel.

Jennifer: Who would want to kill Tiffany? I mean-this all doesnt seem real...none of it.

(Yasmine pulled out her Mac foundation out of her Coach purse and began retouching her face)

Yasmine: Someone wanted to and they did...I was investigated this morning by a detective.

Sasha: Oh my god Yasmine! Like CSI? or something?

(Yasmine nodded in agreement)

Jennifer: Of course there going to be investigating everyone..what did they ask you?

Yasmine: Just where was I and all that other bullshit...I got here early for cheer practice when I got the news..her parents found her body this morning. I havent got any other details than that..How bout you guys?

(Jennifer and Sasha nodded)



Sasha: You guys think the killer is-someone from Woodsberry?

Yasmine: Killer? Sasha...I think thats a little far fetch to say dont you think? I mean for all we know it could of been a theif breaking into there house...The Hillson's are well known for being wealthy in this town and her family own SimCorp. Who doesnt know the Hillsons?

Jennifer: She's right we dont know anything....

Sasha: What if Jason...

(Jennifer ans Yasmine quickly eyed her)



Sasha: I mean....I heard Jason is a suspect.

Yasmine: Dont be foolish Sasha....Jason wouldnt do that. He wasnt even there.

Jennifer: How would you know that?

Yasmine: I mean... come on...we know Jason. He's the highschool quaterback...thats just out of his characteristics.

(Jennifer began to tear up)

Yasmine: Dont cry Jennifer...

Jennifer: I just cant believe our best friends dead...

Yasmine: Look I know its a hard...its hard for all of us. We just need to stay focus.

Sasha: What if there was a killer? You know like on the movies..

Yasmine: Sasha! Enough...there is no killer. Okay? This isnt some kind of movie...

(The blonde beauty hunk known as Blair came into the caferteria. Greeting Yasmine with a kiss.)

Blair: You girls okay? I heard what happened...am really sorry..



Yasmine: What did you hear? Exactly.

Blair: Jason's being held up downtown at the Woodsberry Police Department...being Investigated...Its crazy. I heard Jason had something to do with it...

Yasmine: Will you guys stop...Jason had nothing to do with it.

Blair: Why so defense?

Yasmine: Am just saying...we shouldn't be pointing the finger at our fellow classmate thats all....You played football with him..Didnt you?

Blair: Yea but-

Yasmine: Okay would Jason do something like that?

Blair: well no...but

Yasmine: but nothing....you of all people at this table should know that..

(Yasmine turned her head noticing the Detective this morning walking into the cafeteria headed towards there table)



Detective: I understand you were all close friends of Miss.Hillsons is that correct? am...Detective Pleasant...I'll be calling you all in and talking with you individually through out the day..Miss Conners when you get a second can we talk?

Yasmine: Am sorry but I cant speak to you without a parent or lawyer present...oh wait...my father is my lawyer...I guess will have to talk when daddys around..

(Yasmine shot her a evil grin)

(The detective grinned)

Detective: I'll be in touch. Sorry for your loss

Jennifer: What was that all about?

Yasmine: Ugh nothing...nothing at all..Everything is just too much..Lets all meet up later after third period.

They began to part from the table and Jennifer couldn't help but hear the word "Killer" echo over and over in her head. But most of all she could always tell when Yasmine was keeping a secret and today Yasmine Conners was keeping a secret............






Am Back and its Time to get BittersWeet xoxo
Mad Poster
#22 Old 29th Apr 2009 at 3:02 AM
And the whore is sleeping witht he deads girl boyfriend! Oh shiz what a sl*t! xD

I love it keep it up :D
Field Researcher
#23 Old 30th Apr 2009 at 10:01 PM
Wow this is so mysterious, who killed tiffany lol. Great update.
Lab Assistant
#24 Old 1st May 2009 at 2:58 AM
Oooo suspense i love it! Keep it up!
Forum Resident
#25 Old 1st May 2009 at 9:15 AM
I have a feeling she's covering for Tiffany's boyfriend, he knows something.
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