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#1 Old 21st Oct 2007 at 2:13 AM
Default Love on Fire
I just finished this a couple of minutes ago [I was bored]. It's nothing from my past or anything, I just write as I go.

My love for you is never ending
like a road, constantly bending
it fills my brain, flows through my veins
and each time we kiss...it exchanges.
Your love's like honey, with a taste so sweet...
but along with Winter, it's so bitter, impossible
to make it a treat. It so bittersweet...
but that's how it ought to be,
make you live in misery cause of what you've costed me...
huh, you say life's not fair,
honey look in the mirror,
fairness is not there...

PEACE ♥

--lill © 2007

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#2 Old 24th Oct 2007 at 10:41 PM
wow. Thats very good. I like the emotion, and the way you described it.

Very nice, =]
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