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Hey I'm Beverley Shawn. I've just moved out of my parent's old house and recently graduated college. I've moved into a gorgeous little town called Belladonna cove. I have fallen in love with my perfect little house, 2 bedrooms, 1 bathroom, not much but it's lovely. All my furniture has arrived (But the moving truck was late) and the moving men set it up perfectly. My house isn't the best part though, the garden is beautiful!! It has a hundred Trees, flowers, bushes and a little pond with fishies!
I don't have much food in stock, so sandwiches will have to do for now.
It's been a long day, after a bit of gardening, I'm taking a bath.
I hope you like my story so far! Chapter 1 includes sad stuff, but it gets better!
- nadsy01 x
Chapter 1
Omg! I've just got a call from Cissy, my sister! She wants me to go bowling so I called the taxi. Oh, uh, maybe I should have got dressed up first. Oh well a quick hair change and change my outfit will do. Ohh, I look HOT!
Ah, no. The taxi's here. GTG!
Hey Cissy!
Hey Bev!
Sorry about the really short chapters! This is only HALF of chapter 1. Then on chapter 2... just wait and see.
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"Cissy, can you sleep at my house tonight? Please? I don't want to be alone now. I might start seeing mum's ghost. Remember what happened with dad?"
At college I kept seeing dad's ghost. People said I was a weirdo.
"Bev, I'm not 9 years old." She sighed.
"Please, Cis. I beg of you!"
"Fine" She grumbled, and hopped back in the taxi.
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"I thought you weren't nine years old anymore?" I smiled.
"Hmm, well now I'm ten." She giggled and back flipped.
"Cissy, do you want some hot chocolate?" I ask her.
"Nah, I'm so tired." She yawned at me.
"Uh, It's half nine." I look at my clock. Dammit! I still can't tell time properley. It's a quarter to 12.
"No, Bev. It's 12:45. Besides I have to go to work tomorrow.
I showed my big sister to the guest room and jumped on my own bed.
I'm going to hit the sack too.
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"Toaster pastry please!" Cissy grinned and skipped to the kitchen. I grumbled and shoved the cereal back in the cupboard. I got out the pastry and slapped it on the pan. I put it on a plate and gave it to Cissy.
"Beverley, I haven't heard much of you lately. I have to go to work now, but heres my address, come by soon." She smiled and ran out the door.
I looked at the crumpled up peice of paper. Woah, she lives in one of the best apartments in town! She must of spent her inheritance- and half of mine.
I'm running out of social skills, so with some spare money I bought a parrot called Rayneboe. She squaks a lot, but I love her. (sorta)
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Booyah! -JOB OPEN, SECURITY GUARD. NO EXPERIENCE NECCACARY. START IMMEDIATLEY-
I need some body power for my job, so with the remainder of my money, I bought an excercise machine.
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sweetsweetie85 Yeah sorry about that the limit for inline pics is 175KB and apart from shrinking them i dont know how to make the picture sizes smaller
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OOH! It's my first day at work. After all that working out I did, I'm so tired I could really do with an expresso. I look at my new alarm clock. No! I forgot to set it! I'm nearly late! I threw my new uniform on and ran to the carpool.
-HOURS LATER-
Yawn! I'm back from work! I can't beleive it! On my first day I got a promotion!
I earned a bonus, so...
I got a PUPPY!
Aww her name's Suzi. Isn't she adorable???
I love her so much.
But the bed and dog bowl I ordered havn't come yet.
Oh well.
Oh no I have to go to work now!!
I put Suzi on my bed and put a plate of dog food on the floor in case she got hungry. I'm sooooo Happy!
Cooooosssss...
Yayayayayayayayayy!!! Promotions rock!!!
Jeez Im tired. Oh the dog bed and bowl have arrived now. I'm just gonna set them up and go to bed.
zzzzzz
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I was just on my excercise machine, working out, puff-puff-puff and then I got a call on my cell phone. I reached for it and answered;
"Hello?"
"Beverley? Beverley Shawn?"
"Yep! That's me."
I was beginning to lose my balance. I couldn't speak long,
"Excuse me, but who is this speaking?"
"It's Zack. Zack Hardman."
Oh god! I fell off my machine. Zack! What does he want now? I picked up the cell phone.
"What do you want?"
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"Us? No. No way. It's you OR me now. No we or us." I grumbled back.
"Bevvie, Please forgive me. Do you know what really happened?"
"Yes. I walked into your dorm and you were kissing my best friend." I nearly cried, but I feel stronger now.
"No, Bev, what happened was she came into my room and started kissing me. I didn't mean for anything to happen!" He said calmly.
"Oh, you mean you didn't plan for me to walk in? Zack, I'm not with you anymore." I shouted down the phone. I felt like hanging up, but I liked having something to be angry about. I was gripping a pillow and threw it at the wall. It hit the bookcase and out fell a photo album. It opened to a page...
No! There was a picture of me and Zack. Maybe it was a sign...
"Bevvie? Please speak to me?" I heard from the phone.
"Zack. Sorry. Yes, maybe I will try again. How about I meet you at Red's Famous 50's diner? In 10 minutes?" I smile.
"Oh yeah! I'd love that."
"Bye!"
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I would reccomend maybe squashing a few of your half-chapters together to make longer updates and also making your pics bigger and all the same size instead of some tiny and some big.
But the story's great and I love your casual kind of writing just exploring what your Sim does - rather like "The Sim's Way Of Life".
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Beverley moved into a nice new house with a giant garden.
Her sister told her their mum's just died.
Her sister has spent half of Beverley's inheritance.
Beverley got a job.
Beverley has a bird and a puppy.
Her ex-boyfriend just rang her up and they are going to go to a cafe on a 'date'.
Okay, hope that helped so far. If you don't understand it, comment and I'll reply.
-nadsy01
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sweetsweetie85 hehe thanks Im working hard on it and i'm definatley going to continue. as far as i'm concerned, i'm going to write at least half a chapter a day for the rest of my life lol |
Haha the rest of your life huh. This must be one long story :p
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When I finally got home (The cashier was REALLY slow) I went to Suzi. I loved her little tongue running along my hand. I filled up her food bowl and patted her tiny head. I know she isn't going to be a pup forever so I want to make the most of it. *yawn* I'm tired. I'm going to bed; nice, cosy, warm, snuggly, pink bed. I might be asleep for a looooooong time.....
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My alarm? But my alarm never goes off. Only when there's a BURGLAR!!!!
AHHHHHHH! What do I do? What do I do??????? Oh yeah, I do work for the police. Oh, they already got someone in.
Hey, It's the Hottie, Robert from work!
I have to give him a tip. He's so good-looking! I gave him some money.
"Oh, Thanks, Beverley?" He smiled
"Uh, yeah. I remember you f-from work." I giggled. Oh no. He might start wondering why I'm acting so flirty...
"Yeah, you were in the same car as me once." He said.
"Robert, do you want to come in for some hot chocolate?" I leaned on the door frame waiting for a reply.
"Um, Call me Rob. But if you haven't noticed, I have a dangerous criminal in my car. Maybe another time." He ran off.
-Sigh- He's so hot.
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Uh-oh! Yesterday wasn't my day off! It was today! I rang up work and told them I was sick yesterday. I would be in tomorrow though. Oh well, I can spend today with my gorgeous little Suzi! I need to take her for a walk. She has been very lazy recently.
When I got home I put the kettle on. I need a tea! Maybe I should call Robert. It's his day off today as well...
Hey guys, sorry about the short updates. This one doesn't have pictures because it's too short! Sorry!
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"Hey Robert! How's about that cup 'o tea then?" I said down the phone. I gripped the phone tightly, hoping he'd say...
"Okay, sure!"
"Oh that's great Rob, you kno-"
"Oh, is it okay if I bring a friend?" He asked. A friend? Friend? What's that supposed to mean; Close friend? Girlfriend? Or worse- Boyfriend?
"Beverley?" He said, "Are you still there?"
"Oh yeah. Sure you can bring your friend. Just a friend." I smiled. It's probably another workmate, like Harry or Ned.
"Okay, be there in a bit."
They're here. Oh, Rob's friend is a GIRL!
"Hi, Robert!" I jump out of the house, purposley greeting him first. "Oh, what's your girlfriend's name?"
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"Oh... sorry Rebecca," I said, shaking her hand (With a wedding ring on it) "I just thought-"
"Hey, no sweat Beverley. I know Robbie is a bit of a ladies man, but he really likes you and-" Rebecca said but Rob shook his head and felt himself blushing. Despite that, Rebecca continued, "And he wanted me over here so you would want him more, you know- playing hard to get." She smiled.
I giggled and blushed a bit too.
"Please everyone, come in!" I opened the door. I'm beginning to like Becky.
When we were inside, my earing dropped off. I reached down to get it but Rob caught it and put in back in my ear. Catching a lock of my hair and holding my hand, he said;
"Um, I know a great resturaunt outside town, do you wanna come there, with me? On a d-d-date?"
Uh, yesyesyesyes!
"Okay, Robbie. I'll go on a date with you." I smiled cuteley.
This is going to be great!
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"OW!" He shouted and laughed at the same time.
"Oh! Sorry!" I said and looked at his eye. Not too bad, just bright pink.
"It's okay."
When the waitress asked what we'd like, Rob said
"Lobster" The waitress seemed a little surprised, It was $40 a plate, but Robbie was willing to order for both of us! Aww!
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