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#26 Old 17th May 2006 at 12:25 AM
That's one of the best stories I've ever red. 5 stars
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#27 Old 17th May 2006 at 2:38 AM
great update they are so cute togethger
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#28 Old 20th May 2006 at 3:40 AM
Default Chapter 5
The next day TaQuita invited Jamel and Devonte to come over so they can hangout and drink. Jamel got there first and he and TaQuita talked for a while.

“Quita? You really like Devonte like that?” He said while taking a sip of his henny.

“It aint even really about me likin him. But I mean Heavyn knew that I did like him A LOT and she still messed around wit him. I cant even trust that ho’ no more” she said this while getting mellow

Just then there was a knock at the door. TaQuita went to see who it was. She looked through the peep hole and saw Devonte standing there. She swung the door open. “Hey, you made it” She threw herself on him giving him a big hug.

Devonte didn’t really know what was going on because things were so weird lately, but had to come to get to the bottom of things.

“I’ll be right back. I have to make a phone call” TaQuita walked in the back to her room and called Heavyn.

Ring Ring “Hello” Heavyn said with a raspy voice. “Quita I don’t feel like comin over” She was now sitting up “Quita please, for real I done been through a lot of **** these past few days and I aint in no mood to come over” Now wiping the sleep out of her eyes. “Damn! 5 minutes then I’m leavin…Aight let me get dressed” Heavyn tried to figure out what was so damn important that she had to get out of bed to go all the way across town.

“Yo Doggs I made you a drink” Jamel handed Devonte the drink. Devonte looked him dead in his eyes and said “Thanks” Devonte guzzled the drink down. Things just didn’t seem right. All of a sudden he felt sleepy.

“Jamel? What did you put in my drink” he said trying to keep his balance.

Jamel got up in his face and said “Pay back!” just then Devonte collapsed. Jamel and TaQuita hurried to put Devonte in bed. Jamel left the room with TaQuita and Devonte alone.

TaQuita tried to get Devonte undressed as fast as she could. She then got undressed and forced herself on to him. She was raping Devonte. Just in the middle of things the door bell rang.

Jamel looked through the peep hole and saw Heavyn standing there. He opened the door. When Heavyn saw who was standing at the door. She got flushed with anger. Jamel looked at Heavyn and the scars on her face. He felt bad for what he had done. Heavyn stood there looking puzzled but just turned around to leave. She didn’t know what type of game TaQuita was playing but it wasn’t funny.


“You aint goin nowhere” Jamel said as he snatched her into the house. TaQuita in the back waitin fo’ you.”

Heavyn already inside, so she went to TaQuita’s room. But she wasn’t in there. “Naw the other room” Jamel said as he kept drinking his drink. Heavyn turned around to go into the next room and when she opened the door she saw TaQuita in the bed with Devonte.
“What are you doing?” She screamed. TaQuita turned to her with an evil grin. “Devonte! Get up!” Heavyn started screaming. But he was kinda of doozy. Heavyn looked at her cousin and pounced on her. Devonte woke up a little with all the commotion. He looked over and saw Heavyn and TaQuita fighting.

Devonte jumped off the bed to break them apart. “Heavyn what’s going on?” Devonte said still slurring his words.

“She raped you! I caught her. She was just on top of you!” Devonte was a little confused. He looked down and saw that he only had on his boxers. He couldn’t really compose himself and Heavyn saw that. So she just helped him upstairs and left Quita and Jamel alone. But right before Heavyn walked out the door Jamel yelled “That’s what you get slut! Oh yea and let me not forget. I slept wit ya’ cousin too.” Heavyn looked at him with slanted eyes but just kept it movin.

#29 Old 20th May 2006 at 4:10 AM
OOOO drama drama this story is wats ^ keep it updated its good girl
#30 Old 20th May 2006 at 7:06 AM
Great update!!!
#31 Old 20th May 2006 at 7:24 AM
Keep it comin'. I love this story
Lab Assistant
#32 Old 20th May 2006 at 7:26 AM
Wow I cant believe how mean they are being

If you hate on me I have some advice click your heels thee times and say I wish I had a life
#33 Old 21st May 2006 at 7:55 PM
man i luv this story
Test Subject
#34 Old 21st May 2006 at 10:01 PM
I love it...:D:D:D

If you're ever looking for me I am doing 1 of 3 things...
1. Reading
2. Playing TS2
3. Or I'm on MTS2
Just send me a message if you ever want to talk and I'll get back as soon as possible. Thanxx♥
#35 Old 22nd May 2006 at 8:59 PM
I can't believe OUR story is taking off so well, lol. Thanks Nikki for offering to finish the story for US. lol, girl you are doing so good. I can't wait to get my new story off, it's gon be off da chain anyway.

This story is turning out so well, just wait til yall read the next part.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#36 Old 22nd May 2006 at 11:22 PM
Default Chapter 6
Heavyn rung Devonte’s door bell. Hoping someone was home. “Who?” She could hear a voice say from far. “Heavyn! A friend of Devonte’s” Heavyn yelled. Uniqua opened the door. And saw her baby drugged up. She helped Heavyn bring him inside.

“What happened to him?” Uniqua said. “I don’t know Miss. I found him like this.” Heavyn said in a very soft voice. They put Devonte in bed and Heavyn stayed with him until he woke up. Meanwhile Uniqua made a call to Ron.


“Damn baby. What happened?” Devonte had finally woken up. He was still a little groggy. But he was awake.

“They found out about us.” Heavyn said while just trying to keep Devonte calm and cool. But Devonte wasn’t having it.

“Naw, I was messed up but I remember you saying that’s I was raped and I remember you fighting.” He said well trying to get himself up and dressed. He was acting a little too calm for Heavyn. He was putting his shirt on and said “Don’t worry ma. They gonna get theirs.”

“What are you gonna do?” Heavyn was a little scared to ask this. But she had to know.

“Don’t worry bout it” he said about to walk out of his room. He turned to look at Heavyn and saw her a little sad. “What’s wrong wit you?” he asked. He wasn’t in the mood for all of this mushy stuff.

“It was Jamel. He was the one that raped me” she started crying. “I didn’t want to tell you cuz I thought you were gonna do something crazy, but I cant hold it anymore” Heavyn looked up and saw Devonte’s face turn red. He stormed out the room to find Ron sitting there with his mother.


“What you doin here?” Devonte asked.

“Naw, the question is what are you gonna do?” Ron said as he stood up.

“I’ma handle mine. You know that.” Devonte said with his chest out.

“Be smart D. play ya cards right.” Ron said. “Come on boy lets talk” Ron escorted Devonte back into his room.


Heavyn was left in the living room with Uniqua. “How long you known my baby?” Heavyn was scared so she said very softly “almost 5 months… I’m with him all the time Miss, I love him so much”

“Baby I have my sources and I know he spends all his time with you. I also know the whole situation between you and your cousin. And all that Jamel has done.” She took a puff of her cigarette. “You don’t come from around here so you probably don’t know that in situations like this somebody ends up in a body bag” she looked at Heavyn. “And I’ll be damned if it’s my baby. That’s why I called Ron” She took a long hard sigh. “My son aint no angel. I have no idea what type of person Devonte is. He dabbles in a little of everything. He was a stick up kid, an apprentice to Ron- the biggest dealer around he and now I think he is messin around in contracts.”

Heavyn was thinking hard. “Excuse me but what are contracts?”

“Killin girl” she looked straight into Heavyn’s eyes. “Contract killin”

Heavyn had a hard time catching her breath. She could believe Devonte was what his mother was making him out to be. Just then Devonte and Ron came out the room. “Come on I’m takin you home” he gestured to Heavyn.

She quickly got up and walked out the house. Once he got to her house she turned to him “Don’t hurt my cousin” she was begging “Please Devonte. That’s my blood”

“Whatever… I’ll talk to you later.” He said while opening the door for her. He looked at her sad pitiful face and pulled her close and said “I love you baby” and he kissed her goodbye.

Heavyn stood there watching as he drove off.

He arrived back at his house. Ron and Darnell were waiting for him. “Ay yo, ya’ll ready?” he asked the two big dudes.

“Yeah mann. I got that heat ready fo’ you.” Darnell said. He was ready for some action. He was a beast. He loved fighting and killing. He was helping out for the fun of it.


“Yo, don’t body the girl. Mess her up but let her live” Devonte said while getting his piece together.

“Aight lets go D. I’m hungry” Darnel said.

They called Jamel’s house to see if he was there or still at TaQuita’s house. “Hello” they could hear as Jamel answered the phone. That was the cue. They all ran down stairs. And broke the door down. To get in.

“Who you thought you was messin wit?” Devonte said. Jamel was scared. He got on his knees and was pleading. Devonte started laughing. Not listening to a word Jamel said. All of a sudden he heard crying in the back. He went back there and heard TaQuita crying. Devonte pistol whipped her over and over. There was blood everywhere. She was still alive but was pretty much out of it. When he felt he was done wit her he went back out to the living room where his next victim was.



“Stand up!” Devonte yelled. Jamel did as he was told. “How many times I told you not to play wit me?” Devonte was getting angrier by the moment. Then he pistol whipped Jamel knocking a tooth out.

“Stop playin and handle yo B.I.” Ron told Devonte.

BANG BANG BANG it was done. Devonte ran back up stairs while Ron and Darnell cleaned up.

#37 Old 23rd May 2006 at 2:59 AM
no! i mean, jamal was a horrible rapist, but he shouldn't have gotten shot!!!
i love this story, though.
#38 Old 23rd May 2006 at 3:07 AM
I love it it is very well written bro
#39 Old 23rd May 2006 at 8:59 AM
Great :clap, I feel like I am reading one of my favorite books Nicki. You are doing an excellent job
#40 Old 23rd May 2006 at 1:52 PM
i didn't like jamel but i didn't want him to die.
#41 Old 23rd May 2006 at 2:10 PM
Quote: Originally posted by fexygurl
i didn't like jamel but i didn't want him to die.


Too late Fexy, he's not comin' back. Or is he??? Hurry with the next chapter I'm addicted to this story lol :P
#42 Old 23rd May 2006 at 2:17 PM
Quote: Originally posted by jazzy1
Too late Fexy, he's not comin' back. Or is he??? Hurry with the next chapter I'm addicted to this story lol :P



Girl I already know what's gonna happen, but I'll let yall stay in suspence, hahaha. It's good now, but you just wait, it's getting better.
Lab Assistant
#43 Old 23rd May 2006 at 8:26 PM
Wow this just gets better and better. Jamel and TaQuita deserved it

If you hate on me I have some advice click your heels thee times and say I wish I had a life
Test Subject
#44 Old 23rd May 2006 at 9:10 PM
I never liked Jamal...:D:Dtehe

If you're ever looking for me I am doing 1 of 3 things...
1. Reading
2. Playing TS2
3. Or I'm on MTS2
Just send me a message if you ever want to talk and I'll get back as soon as possible. Thanxx♥
#45 Old 24th May 2006 at 3:37 AM
Wow, Jamel got shot. Eh, I didn't like him anyways.
Lab Assistant
#46 Old 25th May 2006 at 6:32 PM
Wow I just sumbled upon this, it's great!
#47 Old 26th May 2006 at 4:23 PM
Cinnamin, girl this story is off the chain. You are so creative, but I shoulda known. Can't wait for more.
Lab Assistant
#48 Old 27th May 2006 at 2:57 AM
Too much drama! I was a little shocked by the violence at first (on a Sim site), but then I was pleased to see you stepped out the box and did your thing. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#49 Old 28th May 2006 at 7:42 PM
Default Chapter 7
About a half hour later the building was swarmed by cops. A nosy neighbor reported they saw Devonte run out the apartment after she heard the shots. So the cops came and took Devonte.

“You killed Jamel Harris didn’t you. You were upset that he was seeing your girlfriend. Weren’t you?” Devonte laughed at the cops.

“Yall don’t know anything!” Devonte yelled. The detectives roughed him up a bit. But after an hour and a half of interrogation and getting no where they went to talk to the witness.


TaQuita was in the hospital being treated for blunt trauma toward the head. “Ms. Henderson do you know who did this to you?” TaQuita had heard what happened to Jamel and opted to tell the police nothing. She was happy to be alive “No sir I have never seen the person before.” The police knew she was lying but they left her alone. Instead they got a search warrant for Devonte’s house.


“Ha Ha. Mr. Rodriguez. We got you. We have found a Glock 37 .45 GAP under your bed. If we can match this gun to the gun that killed Jamel you are going down!” The cops were pleased with themselves.

“Yall think yall really got something?” Devonte just laughed. And sat there knowing that that gun had no bodies on it. I was sure to beat this murder rap.

Two days later the cops found out that the gun was clean. But Devonte was in possession of an illegal deadly weapon. In turn he was sentenced to 2 years.

“Heavyn, where you goin?” Eve asked while she watched her daughter get dressed and ready to leave out the house. “You didn’t get over that stomach virus yet” She was a little worried. Heavyn had been sick for days now, throwing up all over the place.

“Mommy, I have to go see Devonte. It’s been a whole 2 months since he has been in jail and these phone calls aint cutting it” Heavyn just continued to get dressed.

“Baby, you are only 17 they don’t let minors in by themselves. But look, I’ll make you a promise. If by next week you feel better I’ll drive you up there myself.” Eve knew how much Heavyn loved Devonte and she did not want to separate them. Eve was still under the impression that Devonte only had possession of an illegal weapon, and that he really didn’t kill anybody.

“Its ok, Ms. Uniqua is gonna go with me. I have to meet her at their house” She gave her mother a sad look like she was begging to go.

“Alright but ya’ll call me as soon as ya’ll get there” with that she gave her daughter a hug and kiss and Heavyn was on her way over to Uniqua’s house.


Ding Dong Heavyn rang the door bell. “Just a minute!” she could hear from the back. The door opened up. Uniqua gave Heavyn a long hard hug. They were with each other every step of the way. It was a long 2 month process and they had really bonded with each other. “I’m so glad you can make it this time” She said as she escorted Heavyn inside. “He asks about you all the time. He told me that he has to see your beautiful face” Uniqua smiling from ear to ear. She knew Heavyn going would make her son’s day.

“I had been meaning to go a long time ago but I have been soooo sick. I cant seem to shake this stomach virus off” Heavyn said as she took a seat on the couch.

“Hmph, are you bakin something in that oven?” Uniqua said joking around

Embarrassed and now blushing “Ms Uniqua!”

“Girl I gots to ask these things.” Uniqua lit up a cigarette. “I’m too young and I look too good for a grandbaby. You know I had Devonte when I was 15. I’m only 32 now. I don’t want to repeat this cycle” She got up and went to the bathroom. When she came back she had a pregnancy test. “Here lest be sure. Go take this”

“I’m not pregnant. Plus we need to get going” Heavyn said as she gathered her things.

“It only takes five minutes. Go on now” Uniqua pushed Heavyn in the bathroom


“Ok ok.” Heavyn went into the bathroom. Saying to herself “This is crazy. First of all I’m too young for this and second it was only once. You can’t not get pregnant on the first time. Everyone knows that” she peed on the stick and sat on the toilet seat to wait for the lines to appear. All of a sudden she felt a knot in her stomach. She looked up and saw two lines. She started crying. Uniqua came in and saw that she was pregnant.

“Awww baby.” Uniqua hugged her. Trying to comfort her.

Heavyn had decided to still go see Devonte. She was silent for the whole ride. Then these crazy thoughts came into her mind. What if the baby wasn’t Devonte’s, what if it was Jamel’s baby? She knew it was a possibility, and that killed her inside. For the rest of the ride she just turned over and slept.

Test Subject
#50 Old 28th May 2006 at 11:05 PM
Awwwwwwwwwww...I hope it ain't Jamel's...

If you're ever looking for me I am doing 1 of 3 things...
1. Reading
2. Playing TS2
3. Or I'm on MTS2
Just send me a message if you ever want to talk and I'll get back as soon as possible. Thanxx♥
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