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#1 Old 20th Oct 2007 at 11:16 PM
Default RageRage's poetry phantasmagoria.
I generally write poems when I'm travelling. It helps the flow of the words somehow - all of the following were written over the course of several train journeys. Also, they're generally written on the spur of the moment and in wildly different styles and I never come back and redo them.

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Keep Singing.

To wasted space
and narrow walls
and no one there
to take our calls

to lines of grief
that just read bare
these shallow words
we must not share

to crowded rooms
and empty heads
and empty hands
and empty beds

the pride is all
that keeps me here
a golden word
for crippling fear.
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Sheer wonder, baby.

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#2 Old 22nd Oct 2007 at 1:55 AM
Love the rhyme scheme, and the repetition is pretty neat too. It's kind of lyrical.

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