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#1 Old 18th Oct 2007 at 10:04 PM
Default [ Mickey's Poems ]
So a year ago or so, I started writing a few poems. Not much but I will post what I have soon. I try to write about things that have happened to me, and my friends and family. Its like personal poems, but I would like to share them with you. So please enjoy.


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Like a Sister To Me
(dedicated to my really good friends, Lakeisha, Gianne, and Marrika.)

Never Have i Though that you would be my friend,
That you would make me happy and feel nice about myself,
But yet you are here through the good and the bad,
Always there for me no matter what.

You helped me to see me in a whole different way,
You tought me many lessons,
And shown me the way,
To become a great friend like you have been to me.

You always have my back,
As i have now yours,
And you always help me find the right way to go,
Even when i am struggeling as i was before.

A different culture, a different race,
It doesn't matter to me,
You are my friend,
Like a sister to me.
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#2 Old 18th Oct 2007 at 10:19 PM
its a nice poems to your firends. I wish my friends would have wrote something like that to me.
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#3 Old 18th Oct 2007 at 10:23 PM
Thankyou. Im glad you like the poem. Its actualyl quite old, so its a bit wierd sonding now that I think about it. lol. But I still like it. I have a few more. But Ill post them a bit later.
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#4 Old 20th Oct 2007 at 3:01 AM
Heres another poem:

Confusing Me

One day your my friend,
One day your my enemy,
Its not that I don't like you,
Its that your confusing me.

One day I laugh with you,
The next day you laugh at me,
I though you were my friend,
And that youd be there for me.

But i guess i was mistaken,
And we went our separate ways,
But to this day you still remain to me,
As a friend, not a enemy.
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#5 Old 20th Oct 2007 at 3:57 AM
I like your poetry . There's something to be said for description and elegant prose, but casual writing has its benefits. Sometimes the best message doesn't need to be veiled in big words and imagery- sometimes coming out and saying it is better. I like how you've done that, and I like your style.

Do I dare disturb the universe?
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#6 Old 20th Oct 2007 at 6:24 PM
Thankyou. And I feel the same way. SOmetimes getting a message out can be quite simple.
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