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#51 Old 5th Apr 2009 at 12:31 AM
Very nice.. more please!

And I dont play Pleasantview that much, so it's nice to see what's going on.
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#52 Old 5th Apr 2009 at 3:30 AM
Awww, Darren & Cassie
They are my favourite simlish couple. Cassandra does look good blonde actually.

Call me Meg

lately i want everything
every star tied to a string

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Forum Resident
#53 Old 5th Apr 2009 at 3:33 AM
Nice update! Keep it up
Lab Assistant
#54 Old 5th Apr 2009 at 7:58 AM
Good update! I never thought about making Cass a blonde, she actually looks good. hmmm maybe i should try it out!
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#55 Old 14th Apr 2009 at 1:00 PM Last edited by BriMia : 26th Sep 2009 at 2:08 AM.
Default CH07 Little Love
Chapter 7 - Little Love




"Dirk, I'm in front of the gate. Can you let me in?.. Cool. Bye."
Lilith arrives to the front of the newly remodeled Dreamer house.





"Hey babe, what’s up? You wanted to meet me?"

"Yeah, I wanted ask if i could stay over. My parents are fighting again."

"You oka..?" Dirk starts, only to be cut off by his girlfriend.

"I know. I’m just kind of bummed out. It’s Friday night anyways…
I figure I could come stay with you. At least for the night."





"Of course. But my friends are sleeping over tonight too though.
They're upstairs in my room. We’re going on a college road trip
tomorrow. We’re visiting Académie Le Tour and we’re stopping by
Sims State on our way back. It’s gonna be hella fun. Wanna come?"

"Oh? Who are you going with?"

"Marshall and Syd"





"Wait, Syd?" Oh no.

"Yeah. Sydney Evans. You know her."

"Her? Have you been hanging out with her? Dirk!
You know how I feel about Sydney!"

"Lil, calm down. What’s the big deal? She’s my friend, too."





"I can’t believe you’re doing this to me. This is so humiliating.
Do you not know what happened between me and her?"

"Lil... Why is it such a big deal? She’s a nice girl. Why are you freaking out?"

"I can’t believe you’re hanging out with her. Not only that, you’re letting
her spend the night! You have no idea what you've gotten yourself into.
You have no idea what she's capable of! That girl is nothing but trouble."





Dirk, starting to get agitated with his girlfriend's comments, adds,
"You're the one to talk. You know what Lilith? I can’t do this right now.
I’m tired and you're being unreasonable. I have a long day ahead of me
tomorrow. Why don’t you just go home? Or stay with Angela. We’ll talk
about this when I get back on Sunday."





"I can't go home! That's why I came here. To my boyfriend!
I can't believe you're brushing me off like this. You're choosing
your friends over me. I can't believe you’re choosing HER over me!"





It was this time that the headlights of Darren Dreamer’s car shine through
the window. Dirk’s father is home from his gallery. Lilith can barely recollect
herself before Mr. Dreamer enters the house. Her parents are on the verge
of separation and her boyfriend has been hanging out with Sydney Evans.
________________________________________

If you notice the sudden change of Lilith's outfit, it's because my
Apartment Life CD no longer works, as I've mentioned before. I had to
reinstall everything and I lost some stuff. Sorry for the inconvenience!
Find out what happens (and more about this Sydney Evans girl) on the
next chapter. Thank you for reading! Stay tuned!

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#56 Old 14th Apr 2009 at 3:05 PM
Awww, poor Lilith
I feel for her.
The Dreamer house looks awesome!

Call me Meg

lately i want everything
every star tied to a string

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Mad Poster
#57 Old 14th Apr 2009 at 6:17 PM
*claps* I like the drama moar! *sits and wait with popcorn*
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Original Poster
#58 Old 15th Apr 2009 at 12:54 AM
Haha thank you Kyle! There's more drama to come!
And meggie272, i love decorating the houses in this game!
Field Researcher
#59 Old 16th Apr 2009 at 3:13 AM
Poor Lilith that sucks for her, i know how that is too. Great update.
Lab Assistant
#60 Old 16th Apr 2009 at 3:22 AM
Poor Lilith, she is like my favorite teen to play with! Great job on the new house!
Mad Poster
#61 Old 16th Apr 2009 at 7:18 AM
Quote: Originally posted by BriMia
Haha thank you Kyle! There's more drama to come!

No prob and don't worry about her outfit...Maybe she changed it on her way to see Dirk?xD
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#62 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 12:15 AM Last edited by BriMia : 26th Sep 2009 at 2:09 AM.
Default CH08 Room for Two
Long chapter today. Enjoy!!
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Chapter 8 - Room for Two

"Hi kids! Hey Lilith," Darren and Cassandra enter through the front door.





"Lilith, what are you doing here this late?"
Cassandra asks Mary-Sue's daughter.

"Nothing. I just stopped by to see Dirk here. I saw him so
I guess I'll get going now," answers the girl, forcing a smile.





Seeing the unsettling look on the girl's face, Cassandra realizes
something had happened between the two teenagers.

"No, you should come home with me. It's not safe for a girl
like yourself to be walking around in the middle of the night."
say Cassandra, suddenly feeling protected of the fragile Lilith.

"Now go wait in Darren's car, love. It's getting late. We'll be with you
in a few minutes," the woman suggests in a rather strong manner.





Dirk Dreamer was ready to walk upstairs to his room when Cassandra
interrupts, "Dirk, shouldn't you walk your girlfriend to the car?"





"No that's alright Aunt Cass. I don't want to trouble him.
I'll see you at school, Dirk," says Lilith quickly, fearing the
awkwardness of being alone with her ever so loving boyfriend.





"Bye," Dirk Dreamer quickly walks upstairs to his room.

"She's an emotional wreck, that girl." Cassandra turns to
her best friend, "Her family is going through so much lately."





"I know. I don't understand why Mary-Sue is still married to that
cheating husband of hers." Darren responds then quickly changes
the subject, "Come here. I've got something for you."

Darren leads the lady into his office.





"Darren, is this what I think it is??" screams Cassandra.

"Yep, it's the Luminous Pro Antique Camera. I found two of them
at an auction downtown and I thought I'd get this one for you."

"Oh Darren, thank you so much!"





"No problem, dear," Darren replies, though wishing now more than
ever, that he is the one marrying her instead of that player Don.
"Well, we better get you and Lilith home. Don't wanna make your
fiancé wait too long."


------Meanwhile-----





"Everything okay in here? You guys better hit the hay soon.
It's gonna be a long drive tomorrow.”

"Yeah we just finished the last game, which I totally won, Marshall!"





"Ha. I just went easy on you because you're girl," says Marshall London,
as he walks to Dreamer guest room. "I'll see you in the morning, man."

"Yeah, that's right walk away, Marshie," says Sydney, "Was that
Lilith down there, Dirk? How come she didn't come up and say hi."





"Yeah, she didn't want to stay once I told her you were here. I
don't really know what her problem is. She's just being so rude,"

"Well, we just don't see eye to eye, that's all. Plus, I felt
like she was always out to get me for some reason. You know
how vengeful Lilith can be. Don't you Dirk?"





Quickly changing the subject when he realizes the change
in atmosphere now that only he and Sydney are in the room,
he says, "Ready for bed now? I'll walk you to your room."





Sydney glanced at Dirk's bed and then back at him, "You know Dirk,
your bed is big enough for two people… and I hate sleeping alone."
________________________________________

Thank you for reading! I'm very proud of this chapter. I hope you like it!
Mad Poster
#63 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 12:53 AM
*GASP*

Oh no dirk how could you! this Sydney reminds me of Britney from my second story....


Their names rhyme too....
Lab Assistant
#64 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 3:56 AM
Sydney's such a bitch! Flirting with Dirk, don't you know who he belongs to?!
I hope Lilith kicks her 'behind' :eviltongu
Mad Poster
#65 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 4:36 AM
Nah even better the front, so has no more urge to do things... xD
Forum Resident
#66 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 6:06 AM
^ HAHA. Nice one!

I love the name Sydney so it's hard to hate her, but what a hoe. Get her Lillith!
Lab Assistant
#67 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 6:27 AM
MUAHAHA!!!
Rot in hell Sydney, you evil boyfriend stealer! Lilith, kill her! :twisted:
Scholar
#68 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 7:47 AM
What...a...skank...

You'd better not go along with it Dirk or I will stop thinking you're gorgeous (hard to do, really - I have this insane crush on Dirk for some reason!! hehe)

Call me Meg

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every star tied to a string

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#69 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 8:22 AM
lol all of your comments made me laugh I'm so glad you like the story so far.
I can't spoil much but we're going to see more of this group very soon. I'll also be
going back to the adults and the kids (Alex, Lucy, Beau) later on! Ahhh. Too many
characters. I should start killing some of them off soon. Haaa I'm kidding!!

Read Pleasant People here
Mad Poster
#70 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 8:34 AM
I suggest Sydney :twisted:
Test Subject
#71 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 4:39 PM
Boo, Sydney! If I could i would do the vampire hiss at her. Dirk I wouldn't advise sleeping with that bimbo; Lilith will kick your butt and you're too cute to get your face pounded in. I like your renovation of the Dreamer house will you be showing more renovated homes? I hope Daniel and Mary-sue can patch things up they actually make a cute couple once Daniel quits cheating. Come on Cassandra, go for Darren! Your Don seems- do I dare say it-almost deep and reflective! I hope you continue this story.
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Original Poster
#72 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 6:50 PM
haha I love Sydney! She's so devious. I made her especially cute so she doesn't seem that way. You guys don't like her? But of course everything is not what it seems in this town. So stay tuned to find out more! lol (the power of shameless self promotion).

And lunaselene503, most of the houses will be getting makeovers (I hate hate hate maxis houses). Thanks for noticing Don's change.. He's definitely becoming better.. for now.

PS: and yay!! 1000+ views. Thank you all!

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Field Researcher
#73 Old 19th Apr 2009 at 7:23 PM
Wow didnt expect that but i guess i can see why lilith doesnt like her now.
Theorist
#74 Old 21st Apr 2009 at 2:07 AM
Great story so far! It would be hilarious if the next chapter started with Dirk saying something like "No way! I'm not cheating on my girl!", and then actually refuses to sleep with Sydney.
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Original Poster
#75 Old 22nd Apr 2009 at 3:20 AM
ahha that would be funny! But it wouldn't be funny without the drama!
I'm posting the next chapter this Friday. I hope you all continue to keep reading!!

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