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#1 Old 19th Oct 2007 at 12:09 PM
Default Men *young mindless poem*
This is a poem that I wrote when I was young (really young *17-18*).

Men

Men are very strange creatures
They never help themselves
They think women are their slaves

But

They expect to be applauded
If they do something right
They think they are in the know
But women are just as bright

They don't see that though
They think we are 2nd best
But if it weren't for US women
Men would be a total mess

So I will sum it up now
In not to many words
To be quite precise
Men are total Nerds.

* I have many many poems that I have written over the years, but I have been a very hesitant to write them for basically all the world to see. So here is at least one of them. If I have the nerve I will post a few more, because people in one way or another will and can relate to them.*
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#2 Old 24th Oct 2007 at 10:50 PM
wow. Thats good. lol. I really like how you described the relationship betwwen women and men. Really nice. I love it! :P
#3 Old 21st Mar 2008 at 2:12 PM
That poem is SO right!! I'm SO tired of being under-estimated just because i'm a gurl, thanks Mumo :lovestruc
#4 Old 12th Apr 2008 at 6:48 PM
It is sad to think that some men treat women badly, yes, but to fix this only God can...

Everything I do, All Glory will GO TO GOD! All the praises Goes to the Lord on High!
I don't want to gain the whole world and loose my Soul!
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