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Chapter 20 (Part 1) - Revelation Is Sour, Revenge Is Sweet
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“So what you gonna do” Brian spat out, “kill me?” he let out a little laugh. Ryan stared at him, “No, beat you to a pulp maybe, but not kill you” Brian let out a larger laugh, “because we’re brothers, right?” Ryan shook his head, “no, because I’m going to hand you in to the police”

Brian looked up in shock, “You wouldn’t do that, anyway, this case wouldn’t even make it through court, it’s all about evidence, remember?” Ryan turned around and put his head down, “Yeah, no proof, right?” and he put something in his pocket and turned around. “All the things you’ve done”



“What?” Brian said, “They all deserved it, Mum shouldn’t have kicked me out and I wouldn’t have had to kill her, if Natalie shouldn’t have been so careless and got pregnant, I wouldn’t have had to kick her out and take Caitlin, if Caitlin hadn’t have run away when I beat her up that time, I wouldn’t have had to break into their house, post threats and best of all, haha, run her over. Of course, if I hadn’t have found a letter that Natalie’s sister wrote to Caitlin that made her run away, I wouldn’t have had to have sex with her”

Ryan looked disgusted, “You… raped that woman?” and his face was pure disgust and hatred for Brian. Of course, Brian just let out a smug laugh and said “Scar her for life, best revenge” and looked pleased with himself. Yet Ryan had reason to be pleased with himself. Every sentence that his brother just said was recorded on a sensitive microphone without his brother’s knowledge.



Ryan walked out yelling “I need a minute,” in which Brian yelled “Take your time, not like I’m handcuffed or anything” He walked over to the furthest tree and listened to the tape, it was all there clear as day. He had his evidence and he walked back to the shed, hiding the recorder in his pocket. He kicked him hard in his privates and said “Should stop you doing anything for a while” in which in a winded tone he said “You asshole” and he looked right at him and spat “You deserve everything you get”

Caitlin lay in her room, unaware of what was going on at all. James walked in and closed the door, gently. “Hey, Cait” he said to her in a quiet tone, “How’s the pain?” She looked at him and forced a smile, “better but damn I can still feel it” he walked over and sat down, “you wanna say something, James?” she asked, “I can tell that sitting position, it means you wanna say something,” he let out a small laugh, “perceptive, aren’t you?” he said.

“Your mum just had to have a scan” he said, Caitlin rapidly got up but he stopped her, saying “Wait, wait, it’s fine, the baby’s fine, she just had a turn…” Caitlin still looked worried, “has she found Julie, yet?” his expression turned set, Caitlin stared at him like “Well…?” and he said “Well… something’s happened to her” Caitlin looked horrified and yelled “What? What’s happened to her?” James folded his lips and let go of them and said, “we don’t know exactly, but we do know…” “Know what?” Caitlin said. “I’m sorry Cait,” he said to her and looked down for a moment and then looked straight at her, “It was your dad”



Caitlin put her hand to her mouth, “No, no!” she yelled, “That bas***d!” she yelled, “I gotta get him!” and James grabbed her, “No you’re barely able to get out of bed, calm down, I don’t want you getting ill again” She fell face forward into the bed sheets, crying, “It’s all my fault!” she yelled, “if… just if I had coped with him, I could’ve saved her” and James hugged her.



Julie sat in bed, trying to cope with what had happened, Natalie sat with her. “Are you alright, Julie?” she asked, but Julie said nothing, she just stared at the ceiling with no emotion. Natalie didn’t know what to do, Julie wouldn’t let any of the male doctors near her. She just screamed and ran away from them as they got within five feet of her. Natalie wasn’t stupid, she put the pieces together. She didn’t want to force her to go through that again.



Out of the blue, Julie just said “He raped me” and Natalie had her eyes swell up with tonnes of tears, she went over and hugged her, but Julie just said, “I want him dead. I want him to see what it is like for us,” she sniffed and yelled “I just want to forget, I just wanna be clean” before breaking down into tears again. “Why won’t they let me go to shower? I just wanna go shower” and Natalie told her, “They wanna do a DNA test…” Julie sat up and cried, “Oh god… tests” and she felt so weak, “I can’t cope anymore. I have no energy left” Julie looked at her and said, “He could get locked away with evidence” Julie looked at Natalie, she knew she was right and closing her eyes tightly, she said “okay…”



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